Hi
@MongooseMatt
I've recently bought the "Fifth Frontier War" sourcebook your team put out.
Sadly,
As soon as I opened the PDF, I found the "top" of the two page map of "Opening Moves" (Pages 2 and 3) were in the PDF in reverse order...Bottom over top.
I found I had to crack the PDF security to fix that
I then started working to track the data on that graphic (STILL on pages 2 &3) with the Timeline of the 5FW on page 169
Very Sadly,
I could quickly tell the person or persons responsible for adding dates to the graphics mis-entered on Pages 2&3 had mistaken and misprinted
the dates on many actions
Just inside the cover, there is a two-page graphic showing the opening moves of the 5FW. I have captured a piece of that and added the correct system names (see the attached image below)
On Page 45 of the book, a passage states that Zhodani Fleet 28 mustered at Cronor before jumping to "Cipango and Clan".
They then attacked "Ruby, Emerald, Mongo, Nakege and Lysen"
But, the image form just inside the cover does not show that
It shows forces leaving the Clan and Chwistyoch systems on those attacks
In fact, if you look at the image in the book (not added here), it shows "No" forces being deployed from Cipango in the opening moves of the war.
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On the map of opening moves, a data balloon states the naval base in the Efate system was destroyed on 187-1107
Yet, the timeline given on page 167 states the bases at Eate and Pixie were destroyed on 188-1107
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So, the text says that on 208-1107, the Zhodani accepted defeat in the Mirriam system(Vilis, because there is another Mirriam system i the 5 Sisters Subsector)...
But, as you can see in the included image
....BOTH
...1) The withdrawal from Mirriam is shown...AND
...2) a probing attack strikes..
on 208-1107
So, this is not two teams not communicating
This is a single team, possibly a single *Person* not looking at what they were doing!!!
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The Text writers stated the Siege of Jewell began on 211-1107
But, as you can see in the image in the book, the people working on the graphics got it wrong....again...and put the date as "209-1107"
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This one is an issue where Imperial forces abandon the Jewell Imperial Naval base and withdraw from the system
In the text, the date is 200-1107
In the image, it is 198-1107
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I could go on.....based on the quality control to create a PDF for which you charge $30 US.
These are Basic proofreading failures.....compounded by failures to notice by those assembling pages where type and image are married.....
Compounded by editing failures...
I edit and correct my free-to-read Traveller website better than this, and that takes the form of a full Novella every month.