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Exciting new T5 novel: Fate of the Kinunir

Possible spoilers, you have been warned.

Thanks for taking the bullet for all of us.

I died a little inside so others might live, literature-ally speaking.

Do not let my sacrifice have been in vain.

In other news, Franks transition from incompetent XO to hot-two-las-pistol-wielding stealth assassin was as sudden as it was inexplicable.

Without getting into it, I wasn't that disappointed with the fate of the Kinunir, or it's crew.

They all got what they deserved.

+ + + +

I think I'll re-read Adventure 1 now as a palate cleanser.
 
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I think you're saying that you advise folks to support Traveller because it's Traveller, which is OK up to a point. Problem is, if everything sells because it's got that logo on it, there's no real incentive to put out quality product. Where's my incentive to make sure that Shadow of the Storm feels right for the OTU, if you'd be just as willing to pay for it if I handed in a typo-riddled mess that I'd not even bothered to look at the source material for? I can produce about twice as much drek in the same time as one decent piece.

No, I do think that fans have a right to decide what they like and what they do not, and to expect quality product. Conversely, the publisher does not have a right to expect fans to pay for substandard work because it's got a logo on it.

I'm not commening on FotK here - I've not had time to look at it. I'm talking about products in general. Apart from anything else, I would like to think that my efforts to produce quality product would be rewarded with getting repeat commisisons where others who had not put the same amount of work in might not.

At the end of the day MJD, there will be Travellers who purchase books (be they rule books, source books or novels etc), because it says Traveller. Why? Because we love Traveller. If the books are not high on the quality scale it is ultimately the fans who suffer, along with Travellers well earned reputation. So if your responsible for assisting with the quality and source material then it would be great if you could stress that the quality and attention to detail are valued by Traveller fans, myself included. This first novel was in all honesty a bit of a space turd, but that said, I got a few laughs out of it and if nothing else I was in the Traveller universe(even if the characters were sadly lame), that's why I read a Traveller novel, because I want to share an adventure with someone elses ideas and possibly gain a nice idea for my own games etc.

Personally I just accept the fact that not every single release is going to be the next holy grail of Science Fiction literature or fulfill every single one of my desires. To expect that is to invite disappointment. All I can do is assess each title on it's own merit. Personally I'd like to see the quality of each and every Traveller product match that of the Digest Group Publishing material (The Alien books and the Starship Operators Manual being amongst the best products I've ever seen for Traveller period).

I gave Fate Of The Kinunir 4/10 at the end of the day. It is a shame that this had to be the first novel for Traveller since the release of T5 as it doesn't really do much to enhance or attract new audiences.

Having said that I hope that the new novels to come out after it are of better quality(at least a spell check would be nice) and as others have mentioned, worthy of the Traveller name.

A possible suggestion to someone who is involved with this project would be to try a compilation novel, featuring the best stories from Traveller fans. Personally I'd really love to share some of the adventures fellow Travellers have had and a novel is a great way to share them. Recently Big Finish did a novel like this for one of there productions where they had a competition to be in the next novel they released, a compilation of several fan written stories. The only restrictions are to set the word limit for each of the submissions to keep it manageable.

In any case, here's to the success of the novels and as I've said before, it can only get better from here.

PS. Maybe that's it fellow fans, perhaps this was a lame laugh to show us how much better the other novels will be?
 
Wow. I've not read FotK, but if it's something that you'd describe as a 'space turd' then clearly there are issues.

What I would suggest is that fans talk to FFE directly about quality and whatnot. If X author puts out space turds and Y is producing golden lillies, the you need to make sure FFE knows what you think. Don't assume that because it's on COTI that it will be picked up; nobody has time to read every thread of the board in the hope of finding feedback.

For my part, I have no input into other people's work. I *did* make available a lot of background material (everything I have the right to disseminate) and I strongly advocated authors to read certain works on the relevant canon topics. I have no idea if anyone actually did though.
 
Gotta say, I'm intrigued now -- this novel sounds like such a boldly gibbering mess that I may check out the sample section if it's still available.

In terms of the snottiness & arrogance Olympics, I'm going to go one further than the rest of you and say I basically don't read SF any more. Definitely not on a regular basis since my early teens. OMG, you guys, as a genre or industry or community or whatever it's such awful, awful dreck. And, if twenty years ago I thought it hit bottom, it's dropped its shovels and picked up powerful drilling equipment.

If I really wanted to get involved in a habit-forming, querulous, head-pinching and mind-shallowing masturbatory pastime that made me a creepy bore to others, I'd just take up weed. It's legal now in the state I'm living in -- like SF!

;p

(Now, back to my sophisticated and profound work on turning The Eye of Argon into a work of interactive fiction...)
 
I read the Book a while back.

I did not like it.

It's description of Space Combat felt contrived and the descriptions were overly complicated. The characters seemed too much like cardboard cutouts of archetypes.
But that is my Opinion/feelings about the book.
 
Also, the Imperial Navy appears to be picking its captains out of a hat. Commander Franks, the XO, doesn’t appear to be very competent, but Captain Telson shouldn’t be in charge of a wet navy garbage scow. In my not so humble opinion, of course. I admit that I may be biased by having read a LOT of Napoleonic War sea stories.

Good point. Have you ever met someone who's captained a submarine? Sharp sharp men! A military starship captain wouldn't be any less, and with the population the OTU to draw them from they could have very high standards set for their qualifying courses...

Gee Rancke, great support for future Traveller novelists there.....

He might not be supporting a Traveller novelist, but do you think the game is well supported if related fiction isn't up to par?
 
I'm glad this novel exists because it sparked this highly entertaining and amusing thread, which I've enjoyed reading vastly more than I enjoyed the free sample.
 
Dang! I should have read this thread before buying the book.

Then again, I liked the book, so I'm glad I didn't. But, I would like to know if there's a sequel. This one ended as a cliffhanger.
 
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