[Referee] Hat Activated!
So, Rob, he has
Animals-1 listed, but not the associated Knowledges. Which two does he have (Ride-1), (Trainer-1), or (Teamster-1), or is it one of the Knowledges at (Knowledge-2)?
Same question for
Driver,
Heavy Weapons, and
Pilot, where are the Knowledges?
Also, I use the format
Skill-X (Knowledge-Y) for things like Fighter, so his Fighter skill line would look like this:
Fighter-1 (Blades-1, Slug Thrower-1), which I personally think is much easier to read and interpret. Same goes for Gunner and Engineer which would be
Gunner-1 (Turrets-2) and
Engineer-0 (Life Support-1).
Speaking of Gunner, you do realize that if he got his (Turrets-2) from ANM School, those do not count toward the two required receipts of skill's knowledges? In which case he has
Gunner-0 (Turrets-2). See page 144, end of first column up into the beginning of the second column.
The last is mostly nit-picky, but it should be
Trade (Electronics-1).
EDIT: Also, where is the Genetic Profile? If this is an example he should note his GP die as well as the two die total. Also missed the Honors roll for OTC. (Tsk, tsk, Saint Timmii of the Gamer is crying in shame.

) Need to show that Risk and Reward mechanic in use. Same deal for Promotion. Show your work! Dangnabbit, think of the poor noobs who use this in the future.
Another thing I just realized, he has no Gunner skill as Gunner is now Soldier Skill. Please, use your Errata, sir.
In the Merchant Career, where does the DM +2 come from when he tries for Promotion. And yet another thing, how is getting Promoted twice in one Term? Oh, you didn't label the Rating Promotion and Officer Promotion. That is better, but still confusing to the point where I had to look it up on the sheet. You're killing me here, Rob.

(In the Skills section of Merchant Term 1, Trade really should be capitalized.)
And here I must close because I have other things to do, like take care of the Ship's Cat, eat breakfast and work on my game, etc. Mostly it boils down to show all the work so that new Travellers can see and understand the whole process.