Looking for opinions and advice

[Spinward Scout]

How does this look to you? I'm talking more the page layout.

Would you print it out?

Does it need to look better?

What's your feedback on the way it looks?

 

[Dragoner]

Looks good. Personally I would not tab the first paragraph, and would try bold instead of italic on the sections: prologue, act I, etc..

 

[Spinward Scout]

Looks good. Personally I would not tab the first paragraph, and would try bold instead of italic on the sections: prologue, act I, etc..

Thanks for the feedback. I will fix that tomorrow.