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Old August 25th, 2019, 11:19 PM
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So, as this story evolves I find myself making little logical errors here and there. For instance, I introduce Farber as a captain, but then switch his rank to borderline incompetent first officer. And I also didn't give any narration to the Solomani Far Trader.


But, writing is a discover process. I'm not trying to gloss over or talk my way out of bad writing, creating truly is like that. An edited second draft would (or will) be much longer as I give more exposition to the female captain; her background, her purpose of being the purpose of the Far Trader and so forth.

More later. I'm on a VPN and I'm not liking it.
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