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Old August 1st, 2018, 02:35 AM
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Originally Posted by Tiikeri View Post
Thanks for your comments, I appreciate them.

Thanks, I'm always concerned if I'm expressing myself clearly, and that I'm properly communicating what I want to say to the reader.

Unfortunately I didn't know how to connect the dream sequence in a better way.

And because of her damaged confidence, Anna can't accept Rodrigo's love, when Rodrigo is the only one keeping her safe from Ashem.

I don't have the ability to make a full story. It's more complicated than I realized. It's straightforward enough to relate the events in a character's life. What's more complicated is figuring out how the character changes, the goal, the antagonist, etc. I'm reading a very good book about it now, John Truby's Anatomy of a Story. After that I'll read a book about writing style that I have. Maybe I'll take another crack at it after that.

It is complicated.

But I like this and I encourage you to continue writing fiction.

Oh, and is the world she's living on something you've developed more lore on?
EDIT-- Ah, looked it up.


I recognized some names: Tarsus and Efate.
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Old August 1st, 2018, 03:36 AM
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Anna was originally a Fading Suns character, so I Travellerized her.
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