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Arrow [Referee] Regarding Your Character: Areri Shashimamikuus.

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Name: Areri Shashimamikuus
Born: 201-0150 PI. Died: (Still Living). Age: 50.
Hair: Black. Eyes: Green. Height: 168 cm. Mass: 61 kg.
Title(s): Distinguished Professor Emeritus of Linguistics, Adishmu University. Will have to figure out which world it is on. See Star Chart for World List and chose a world.
Fame: 18 (Rank Scholar10, 6 Publications, Mustering Out +2 What is this?).

UPP: 68C9D8.
Birth UPP: 67A6B6.
Genetic Profile: 5242X6.

Skills: Broker-4, Bureaucrat-2, Comms-2, Fighting (Unarmed)-2, Flyer-2, Hostile Environ-2, Knowledge (Scholar)-9, Language (Anglic)-12, Language (Battle)-10, Language (Gvegh)-12, Language (Trokh)-12, Language (Zdant)-10, Language (!kee: )-9, Steward-2, Streetwise-1, Survey-2, Survival-3, Trade (Programmer)-1, Vacc Suit-2. Yeah, as you noted below the Languages will need to be adjusted as the standard Traveller Aliens don't exist in this ATU. However, you can get one Alien Language: the sign language of the Voodgi of Colony A [FS 0724].

Birthworld: C 420 978-B. Can I get you to chose a world from the Worlds List?
Homeworld: C 420 978-B.
Homeworld Skills: Hostile Environ-1, Steward-1, Streetwise-1, Survival-1, Trade (Programmer)-1.

Pre-Career Term (0168 to 0172 PI): Apply to University (Education 11): roll=5 (Accepted to Adishmu University).
Pass/Fail: Education 11, rolls: Year 1 =5, Year 2 =5, Year 3 =5, Year 4 =3, Pass all.
Major: Language (Anglic)-12, Language (Vilani)-12, Language (Gvegh)-11 One Major. One. Chose, chose and perish. , Minor: Broker-2.
Honors: Pass/Fail: Intelligence 6, roll=5.
Graduated: BA with Honors in Linguistics.

Pre-Career Term (0172 to 0174 PI): Apply to Graduate School (Education 11): roll=6 (Accepted to Adishmu University Graduate Program).
Pass/Fail: Education 11, rolls: Year 1 =8, Year 2 =9, Pass both.
Major: Language (Gvegh)-12, Language (Trokh)-9, Minor: Broker-1.
Where's the Honors attempt? You do know you can attempt them in all Education Terms, right?
Graduated: MA in Linguistics.

Pre-Career Term (0174 to 0176 PI): Apply to Post-Graduate School (Education 11): roll=7 (Accepted to Adishmu University Post-Graduate Program).
Pass/Fail: Education 11, rolls: Year 1 =10, Year 2 =5, Pass both.
Major: Language (Trokh)-11, Minor: Broker-1.
Same here. Honors?
Graduated: Education 12, Doctorate in Linguistics.


Term 1 (0176 to 0180 PI): 2 Scholar.
Age: 30.
UPP: 67A7C8.
Begin: Education 12, roll =5 Success.
Automatic: Education 8+: Scholar1.
Risk (C1): Strength 6, roll =4 Success.
Reward (C1): Strength 6, roll =3 Success.
Publication: Formal and Informal Comparisons of Imperial and [REDACTED] Naval Commands.
Promotion: Intelligence 6 +1 Publication =7, roll =6 Success: Scholar2.
Continue: Education 12 +1 Publication =13, roll =6 Success.
Skills: C6 +1 (Social 7), Comms-1, Vacc Suit-1, C6 +1 (Social 8), C4 +1 (Intelligence 7), Language (Trokh)-12, Language (Battle)-8. Again, only one Major to apply the Major +2 Skill to. Chose which one, there should be only 6 Skills here: 4 for Term, 1 for Promotion and 1 at +2 for Major (Successful Research)

Term 2 (0180 to 0184 PI): 2 Scholar.
Age: 34.
UPP: 67A7C8.
Risk (C4): Intelligence 7, roll =5 Success.
Reward (C4): Intelligence 7, roll =5 Success.
Publication: A Working Study of Imperial Star Marine Commands and Usages.
Promotion: Intelligence 7 +2 Publications =9, roll =2 Success: Scholar3.
Tenure: Publications (2) x3 =6, roll =8 Failure.
Continue: Education 12 +2 Publications =14, roll =10 Success.
Skills: Scholar-1, This not a Scholar Promotion, this is the Vocational Skill which is the knowledge of your Career's cultures, subcultures, traditions, rituals, customs, and so on., Survey-1, Fighting (Unarmed)-1, Survival-1, Bureaucrat-1, Language (Battle)-10.
Aging: Life Stage 5<2D, C1 roll =7 Failure, C2, roll =7 Failure, C3 roll =9 Failure.

Term 3 (0184 to 0188 PI): 2 Scholar.
Age: 38.
UPP: 67A7C8.
Risk (C2): Dexterity 7, roll =7 Success.
Reward (C2): Dexterity 7, roll =7 Success.
Publication: Field Studies of Developments in Imperial Star Marine Battle Language.
Promotion: Intelligence 7 +3 Publications =10, roll =2 Success: Scholar4.
Tenure: Publications (3) x3 =9, roll =4 Success.
Continue: Education 12 +3 Publications =15, roll =10 Success.
Skills: Scholar-1. Same here. Not Scholar Promotion. Just the Skill. Which should be Scholar-2 at this point., Comms-1, Fighting (Unarmed)-1, Bureaucrat-1, Survey-1, Language (Zdant)-8.
Aging: Life Stage 5<2D, C1 roll =12 Failure, C2, roll =9 Failure, C3 roll =7 Failure.

Term 4 (0188 to 0192 PI): 2 Scholar.
Age: 42.
UPP: 57A7C8.
Risk (C3): Endurance 10, roll =7 Success.
Reward (C3): Endurance 10, roll =9 Success.
Publication: Zdant: The Language in Action [REDACTED]
Promotion: Intelligence 7 +4 Publications =11, roll =8 Success: Scholar5.
Continue: Education 12 +4 Publications =16, roll =4 Success.
Skills: Flyer-1, Hostile Environ-1, Survival-1, Flyer-1, Vacc Suit-1, Language (Zdant)-10.
Aging: Life Stage 6<2D, C1 roll =3 Success (-1 Strength), C2, roll =8 Failure, C3 roll =10 Failure.

Term 5 (0192 to 0196 PI): 2 Scholar.
Age: 46.
UPP: 57B8D8.
Risk (C3): Endurance 10, roll =7 Success.
Reward (C3): Endurance 10, roll =9 Success.
Publication: !kee: Studies: Approaching a Language
Promotion: Intelligence 8 +5 Publications =13, roll =8 Success: Scholar6.
Continue: Education 13 +5 Publications =18, roll =4 Success.
Skills: End +1, Int +1, Str +1, End +1, Edu +1, Language (!kee: )-7.
Aging: Life Stage 6<2D, C1 roll =3 Success (-1 Strength), C2, roll =9 Failure, C3 roll =8 Failure.

Term 6 (0196 to 0200 PI): 2 Scholar.
Age: 50.
UPP: 68C9D8.
Risk (C4): Intelligence 8, roll =7 Success.
Reward (C4): Intelligence 8, roll =7 Success.
Publication: The Roots, History, and Recent Developments in !kee:
Promotion: Intelligence 8 +6 Publications =14, roll =5 Success: Scholar7.
Continue: Education 13 +5 Publications =19, roll =4 Success.
Skills: Steward-1, Str +1, Dex +1, Int +1, Scholar-1, Language (!kee: )-9.
Aging: Life Stage 7<2D, C1 roll =8 Failure, C2, roll =9 Failure, C3 roll =8 Failure.


Muster Out (6): Fame+2, Life Insurance, Cr120,000.

Bio: [TBD].

For the languages, I'll need your assistance, obviously, as YATU will likely have significant differences.
Okay, once I get rolling I will have you some more Alien Languages. For now however, remember this is a star empire of humans and thus the languages of ancient Terra still are spoken in a form or two in the Permatic Imperium. Battle is fine and is still used, in fact it like the Voodgi language is gesture based, though it does have a verbal component which the stone deaf Voodgi language does not. Also Battle assumes two fore limbs while the Voodgi only have one arm, thus the human phrase "on the other hand" frustrates them. (A little tidbit for both the Scholars in the crew. )

For now, though it looks okay for the most part to me, now on to the others.

One last thing, if you chose a Homeworld from the List then I can get you the UWP Extensions for that world to help you with your Bio.
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